SWRT 108 | Put ‘Em Up!
May 30, 2019

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This week, Alida, Robert, & Kathryn spar at the Round Table. What makes a fight scene memorable to readers? How do you manage both choreography & time in fight scenes? How much detail is just enough? What about wounding your characters? Making the epic specific? And more!

 

 

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What are some problems with fight scenes? What happens if you go too quickly? Or too slowly? How can you slow the action down in a good way? What does slow action do to the tension within your story? And don’t forget about your character’s wounds!

What we talked about:

What is Kathryn’s problem with fight scenes? (0:35)

What happens if you go too quickly through a fight scene? Or too slowly? (1:44)

Don’t resolve your fight scene too quickly! (4:10)

How can you slow it down in a good way? (5:10)

Robert’s theory about fight scenes and ratcheting tension. (6:30)

Know what you are doing with your narrative! (9:53)

How does the aftermath of your fight scene work into your story? (12:55)

How do you handle massive battle scenes? (15:10)

Think like a film director, when should I be close? When should I be far away? (19:25)

The right way to slow things down! (22:05)

Wound trivialization! (23:50)

 

 

LINKS

Things we mentioned:

Dances with Wolves 
Codex Alera by Jim Butcher 
Bullet in the Brain by Tobias Wolf 
Chris Fox 

Want more about these topics? Check out:

SWRT 31 Action Scenes

Writing Tip on Fight Scenes

Writing Tip on Continuity 

 

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