SWRT 252 | Faces

May 5, 2022

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This week on the Story Works Round Table, Alida, Kathryn, & Robert talk about describing your characters’ faces so they make an impression on your readers. Faces are so much more than a list of physical traits, brown hair, deep eyes, cleft chin. Lists are forgettable. When you describe your characters, strive to convey an impression of the *person* through the face.

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What we talked about:

Why are we talking about faces? (0:22)

Why don’t people write faces? (1:40)

Alida’s example. (3:55)

Using the face as a gateway to your character. (8:15)

Work your way into your characters face. (12:00)

Why aren’t we describing faces in the same way as they have been in the past? (14:10)

Why you should describe the physical traits of a character. (19:44)

How this changes description. (22:35)

LINKS

Get Alida’s Writing Tips here.

Things we mentioned:

Charles Baxter
Murder on the Orient Express
Agatha Christie
Long Days Journey into Night by Eugene O’Neill

Have thoughts, questions, other examples? Join the conversation at the Story Works Writers Facebook group.

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Alida Winternheimer is an award-winning author with an MFA in writing from Hamline University. She pursues her fervor for all things story as a writing coach, developmental editor, and teacher. Two of her short stories were nominated for the Pushcart Prize. She is the author of The Story Works Guide to Writing Fiction Series. Alida lives in Minneapolis, Minnesota with her Golden Retriever, Seva the Wonder Dog. She camps, bikes, and kayaks in her free time. Unless it’s winter, in which case she drinks chai by the fire. You can find more at www.alidawinternheimer.com.

Kathryn Arnold writes fantasy and anything else that sparks her creativity from her home in Kingston, Washington. She currently earns her living as an insurance underwriting assistant, where she also creates marketing and web copy. When not writing, she plays (and teaches) piano and keyboard in a band (or two), and is working on starting a ministry team with her husband. You can find Kathryn at www.skyfirewords.com.

Robert Scanlon was born in Australia, but whisked off to England when only a baby. After many years complaining about the weather, he did the sensible thing and moved back to Australia. Despite a career in the music industry, followed by decades teaching public speaking, Robert is an introvert who adores reading. Robert grew up on a diet of sci-fi masters, eventually discovering he had read the library’s entire science fiction section. Now he has to write his own. Robert is the author of Constellation, book one of the Blood Empire space opera series. Find out more at www.RobertScanlon.com