SWRT 263 | Act II
August 25, 2022

Excerpt

Robert: A big problem is that when you dream up your story, you have this amazing sense of, I just thought this amazing thing is going to happen to this character and then how it’s all going to end. Okay, but there’s 50% of your double, which I just haven’t thought about yet. I think for many of us, it’s being able to slow down, tease apart the problem, and introduce all of the complications that are required to then deliver that delicious climax that is really satisfying to the reader. So it’s such an important task, yet it’s probably the thing we naturally, as writers, I’m making it very everybody. It’s not everybody’s problem, of course, but we do know many of us experience the problem where we don’t know what to put in the middle there, I suppose. 

Kathryn: Yeah, we have this big empty gap, like, just tell me what to put in here, please.

 

Sound familiar? Then sit back and enjoy this week’s episode all about “what to put in here, please!”

 

 

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SHOW NOTES

What we talked about:

What are some problems we have with Act Two? (0:52)

Broaden your focus away from the main plot. (3:42)

Sub-plot, not Side-plot. (6:45)

Don’t pigeonhole your side characters. (9:05)

The problem of too much going on. (12:38)

Use moments of convergence. (16:43)

Use your side characters and subplots to drive us towards the climax. (18:55)

When your main plot is taking a breather, what do you do to avoid a soggy middle? (19:30)

How different writers can use different tools to discover the middle of their story. (20:50)

 

 

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SWRT 263 | Act II

Does this sound familiar? Robert: A big problem is that when you dream up your story, you have this amazing sense of, I just thought this amazing thing is going to happen to this character and then how it’s all going to end. Okay, but there’s 50% of your double, which I just haven’t thought about yet. I think for many of us, it’s being able to slow down, tease apart the problem, and introduce all of the complications that are required to then deliver that delicious climax that is really satisfying to the reader. So it’s such an important task, yet it’s probably the thing we naturally, as writers, I’m making it very everybody. It’s not everybody’s problem, of course, but we do know many of us experience the problem where we don’t know what to put in the middle there, I suppose. 
Kathryn: Yeah, we have this big empty gap, like, just tell me what to put in here, please.
 
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LINKS

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Things we mentioned:

Blueprint Your Bestseller by Stuart Horwitz 
Wakefield 

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Alida

Alida Winternheimer is an award-winning author with an MFA in writing from Hamline University. She pursues her fervor for all things story as a writing coach, developmental editor, and teacher. Two of her short stories were nominated for the Pushcart Prize. She is the author of The Story Works Guide to Writing Fiction Series. Alida lives in Minneapolis, Minnesota with her Golden Retriever, Seva the Wonder Dog. She camps, bikes, and kayaks in her free time. Unless it’s winter, in which case she drinks chai by the fire. You can find more at www.alidawinternheimer.com.

Kathryn
Kathryn Arnold writes fantasy and anything else that sparks her creativity from her home in Kingston, Washington. She currently earns her living as an insurance underwriting assistant, where she also creates marketing and web copy. When not writing, she plays (and teaches) piano and keyboard in a band (or two), and is working on starting a ministry team with her husband. You can find Kathryn at www.skyfirewords.com.
Robert
Robert Scanlon was born in Australia, but whisked off to England when only a baby. After many years complaining about the weather, he did the sensible thing and moved back to Australia. Despite a career in the music industry, followed by decades teaching public speaking, Robert is an introvert who adores reading. Robert grew up on a diet of sci-fi masters, eventually discovering he had read the library’s entire science fiction section. Now he has to write his own. Robert is the author of Constellation, book one of the Blood Empire space opera series. Find out more at www.RobertScanlon.com