SWRT 264 | Writing Physicality

September 8, 2022

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This week on the Story Works Round Table, Alida, Robert, & Kathryn get physical (and you won’t believe the scenes that get Robert in trouble!). When you need your characters to do something involving specific bodily movements, how can you create choreography that delivers the precise image you want in the reader’s mind, then move beyond choreography to create a felt experience in your reader’s body?

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What we talked about:

How do you put your character in motion? (0:41)

Find the detail. (4:07)

Moving from choreography to story. (6:03)

Stretch out your time. (8:07)

Bring in the surrounding world. (8:43)

Don’t write a manual. (10:26)

The less familiar something is, the more you need to describe it. (14:15)

What if you use the same physicality throughout the book? (15:25)

Use beginners mind. (16:05)

How do you get it right? (18:10)

Remember your reader. (20:45)

Does it serve a purpose in the plot? (22:32)

Go and do something to bolster your descriptive skills. (25:10)

LINKS

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Things we mentioned:

Tom Clancy
Enders Game by Orson Scott Card
Harry Potter
Chris Hadfield Crying in Space
Project Hail Mary by Andy Weir

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Alida Winternheimer is an award-winning author with an MFA in writing from Hamline University. She pursues her fervor for all things story as a writing coach, developmental editor, and teacher. Two of her short stories were nominated for the Pushcart Prize. She is the author of The Story Works Guide to Writing Fiction Series. Alida lives in Minneapolis, Minnesota with her Golden Retriever, Seva the Wonder Dog. She camps, bikes, and kayaks in her free time. Unless it’s winter, in which case she drinks chai by the fire. You can find more at www.alidawinternheimer.com.

Kathryn Arnold writes fantasy and anything else that sparks her creativity from her home in Kingston, Washington. She currently earns her living as an insurance underwriting assistant, where she also creates marketing and web copy. When not writing, she plays (and teaches) piano and keyboard in a band (or two), and is working on starting a ministry team with her husband. You can find Kathryn at www.skyfirewords.com.

Robert Scanlon was born in Australia, but whisked off to England when only a baby. After many years complaining about the weather, he did the sensible thing and moved back to Australia. Despite a career in the music industry, followed by decades teaching public speaking, Robert is an introvert who adores reading. Robert grew up on a diet of sci-fi masters, eventually discovering he had read the library’s entire science fiction section. Now he has to write his own. Robert is the author of Constellation, book one of the Blood Empire space opera series. Find out more at www.RobertScanlon.com