SWRT 256 | Act I, a Library Links episode
June 2, 2022

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Alida: We’ve done our work in Act One. Right? We’ve introduced the character, we’ve introduced the stakes, we’ve introduced the supporting characters, the setting, and we have set up the choice she needs to make. And therefore what kind of repercussions are going to start unfolding in Act Two? And what other kinds of events can come forth? The cowboy returns, wounded but alive. The dentist passes away, but she’s already pregnant by him. And now does the cowboy take her back?

Kathryn: That’s where the fun comes in, right? And I think for me, I always struggle with Act One with that idea of, Wait, what am I supposed to say here? Like, I know where I’m going but I don’t backtrack well enough. I liked that example because you gave us such a strong inciting incident. So I was able to think, okay, think backwards, because for me, I can always kind of, oh, and then my way through brainstorming for act two. But act one always kind of feels a little bit more like, wait, hold on, what did I need? And how do I get there? 

 

 

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SHOW NOTES

What we talked about:

What does your opening scene do? (0:48)

What is the purpose of Act 1 anyway? (2:32)

Act 1 as a mini-story. (5:41)

Don’t confuse your opening with your inciting incident. (6:44)

Act 1 is not disconnected from Act 2. (7:21)

Some examples from Alida of opening action. (8:40)

Craft your Act 1 so that your character will choose to go into Act 2. (12:53)

Reverse engineer from your inciting incident. (15:33)

Don’t pull in too much information – just give us enough to make the choice inevitable. (18:45)

Where confusion can come for a writer. (19:35)

What about agency? (21:45)

 

 

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SWRT 256 | Act I, a Library Links episode

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What is Act 2 and why do writers struggle with it? How should you plot Act 2 and what questions should you ask yourself in each and every scene? How do you use subplots and supporting characters to flesh out Act 2? Remember you are writing from the inciting incident to the beginning of Act 3, not all the way to the climax. And that turning point into your climax should be awesome. Act 2 is not going to look great at the end of your first draft, it’s all about weaving in details, subplots, and revelations. Just make sure it gets the attention that it deserves!

 

 

LINKS

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Things we mentioned:

Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope 
The Wizard of Oz 

 

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Alida

Alida Winternheimer is an award-winning author with an MFA in writing from Hamline University. She pursues her fervor for all things story as a writing coach, developmental editor, and teacher. Two of her short stories were nominated for the Pushcart Prize. She is the author of The Story Works Guide to Writing Fiction Series. Alida lives in Minneapolis, Minnesota with her Golden Retriever, Seva the Wonder Dog. She camps, bikes, and kayaks in her free time. Unless it’s winter, in which case she drinks chai by the fire. You can find more at www.alidawinternheimer.com.

Kathryn
Kathryn Arnold writes fantasy and anything else that sparks her creativity from her home in Kingston, Washington. She currently earns her living as an insurance underwriting assistant, where she also creates marketing and web copy. When not writing, she plays (and teaches) piano and keyboard in a band (or two), and is working on starting a ministry team with her husband. You can find Kathryn at www.skyfirewords.com.
Robert
Robert Scanlon was born in Australia, but whisked off to England when only a baby. After many years complaining about the weather, he did the sensible thing and moved back to Australia. Despite a career in the music industry, followed by decades teaching public speaking, Robert is an introvert who adores reading. Robert grew up on a diet of sci-fi masters, eventually discovering he had read the library’s entire science fiction section. Now he has to write his own. Robert is the author of Constellation, book one of the Blood Empire space opera series. Find out more at www.RobertScanlon.com